An Embarrassing Bus Ride
One day, Steven took a bus as usual. Then, an old woman took the bus while he sat in his soft seat. The old woman took a cane and walked exhaustedly. Steven sometimes took the priority seat. It was Steven’s bad habit. Then, he listened to music with his ear-phones and was happy.
After that, the old woman didn’t find any seat to sit. She was angry and told Steven to yield to her. Steven was sorry and embarrassed for his fault, so he stood up to yield to her. But the old woman was still angry because Steven wore his ear-phones and didn’t seriously listen to her complain. Then, Steven hurried up to take out the ear-phones and looked over. Steven didn’t have anything else to do but freeze.
Comment: I think is a good writing. Yu didn’t make many mistakes and the story flowed well. I would encourage you to be more creative though. Don’t be afraid to give the story some funny, interesting parts, even if it isn’t realistic. Have fun with it!
An Embarrassing Bus Ride
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